Black Eyed Susan Poet Rhyme

Grilled Cheese

Cheese melting into the bread
Hot and sticky, soon to be fed
Like I am melting into you
You stick to me like Elmer's glue
You satsify my needs like rape
Then rip yourself off me like tape - 
You burn the bread; it's harder
But I'm not hungry any longer



Susan Burch

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Poet Destroyer A November 24, 2013 at 11:35 AM Hola, Black eyes Susan... ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA

Skat A November 22, 2013 at 12:05 PM Susan , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown April 13, 2012 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Susan. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2012 at 10:26 PM Susan, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2011 at 12:49 PM Stopping by your amazing poetry to thank you for your kind comments on mine Susan. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz June 9, 2011 at 6:47 AM I love grilled cheese! This is a very inventive write, with a bitter-sweet feel to it. Good one! Regards, Robert.

James Foulk June 8, 2011 at 10:19 AM a great write, and makes me want to have Grilled Cheese for lunch. liked the way you wrote this one. It was a great Rhyme, well written.