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Grilled Cheese

Cheese melting into the bread Hot and sticky, soon to be fed Like I am melting into you You stick to me like Elmer's glue You satsify my needs like rape Then rip yourself off me like tape - You burn the bread; it's harder But I'm not hungry any longer Susan Burch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2013 11:35:00 AM
Hola, Black eyes Susan... ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:05:00 PM
Susan , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2012 10:26:00 PM
Susan, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:49:00 PM
Stopping by your amazing poetry to thank you for your kind comments on mine Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:47:00 AM
I love grilled cheese! This is a very inventive write, with a bitter-sweet feel to it. Good one! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:19:00 AM
a great write, and makes me want to have Grilled Cheese for lunch. liked the way you wrote this one. It was a great Rhyme, well written.
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