Grieving Thoughts

Grieving thoughts, the places they go
What if the body, really does have a soul?
What if there is no heaven or no hell?
Why were we here for such a short spell?
Why isn't life fair? Why do we have emotions?
Why do some people care, while some have no devotions?

If tomorrow was to be, your last day and you knew it.
How would you spend your day?
Saying goodbye to those you love
Or just let it come it's way?
Perhaps vanity, would make an appearance
As you think of your legacy.
How far have you come?
How much good have you done?
Will it alter your eternity?

It would be too late, to have regrets
Although, we'd have some, I would bet.
I'm sure some would cry, those fearing to die
Convincing themselves, it was their best try.
The godless would play. The God fearing would pray. 
What would you do, if it was your last day?

I'd like to think, it would be a good day
I'd walk down to the spring, watch the animals play.
Let the mist from the water, cool my face
Spend one last day with nature's grace.
My life has been spent learning lots of new things
Trying hard not think, what tomorrow might bring.
Grieving thoughts, the places they go
Searching for answers, for things I don't know.



    by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Hello Tim, How are you doing? Did something happen? You sound so sad. I hope that you are not sick. Speak to me. This poem asks a lot of questions that no one can answer. Have a nice day my friend.
Timperley Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Grieve not on the last day for the best is yet to come. You have not responded in your usual manner Daniel and that gives us all here on the soup, concern. God Bless. D.
Borke Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Let us know that you're okay
Smith Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:43 PM
I miss you little buddy, hope you're back real soon...
Marine Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Hi Daniel, how are you doing? So sorry you are suffering so much, ...we ask questions because we are human- I dont think animals ask or think about spiritual thiings, like why we are here, or what is our future... I was asking those questions as a young girl, life was difficult. I hope you are feeling calmer,? Best wishes, and carry on writing! :-)
Kannan Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 9:38 PM
How are you? Missing your poems... Hope you are well...
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Hellooo....
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Hi Daniel, just stopping by to check on you and hope you are doing well, my friend. This is such a most thought-provoking piece that you have penned. Particularly at this stage of my life, I can identify with the message of this very deep write as I am trying to come to grips with these very powerful philosophical questions you pose. Honestly, I often draw a blank, but at the same time, I try to be positive, happy, and live life to the fullest. Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Wood Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 11:27 PM
Daniel, Wouldn't it be fun to just sit for morning next to your spring and talk about this. I don't wonder anymore. Hope you're doing well friend. -- Dean
Murray Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:58 PM
My Daddy used to say "You are only young twice!" I just try to make the most of every day that comes along Daniel. Eight years ago my cardiologist told me I had four years to live. So far, so good.
One Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Do we ever stop, or just learn to live with it? A deep emotive write my friend..
Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Hi Danny, hope you're doing well...long time, friend??
Marie Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 1:58 AM
smiles and love, DT:)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Wow! That is a powerful written poem. I have no clue what i would do if i knew it was my last day. I would have to go into deep thought for that answer. have a good evening my friend.
Horsman Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Philosopher personified, wonderful poet
Kannan Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:56 AM
How are you? Hope everything is fine...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 10:22 AM
Great existential poetry, Daniel! Searching for the deep answers of cosmic truth is what makes life worth living. Me, last day? Mmm ... pray, meditate. Listen to some quiet peaceful music like "Fallen" by Bombay Dub Orchestra or "Peace of Mind" by Jerald Daemyon. Good spiritual vibrations this poem elicits. Pure thought provoking poetry. Love and peace, my friend.
Sergi Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 11:23 AM
HI Daniel: To question your role in life is to live another day to question again. Then maybe you will meet someone who can give you the answer. Great Write!
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 1:09 PM
a deep reflection from the soul, daniel.. very intriguing and though-provoking... glad you're around again... how are you?,, huggs
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Wow! All these questions you ask and no answers. Daniel no one has these questions. if we did we would know the answers. have a great evening my friend.
Babcock Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 12:42 PM
Questions we have asked ourselves. Just trust the God always has our back and let our worries go to him. Love the poem. love phyl
Downing  Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 8:08 PM
So much we don't know, yet we have hopes. Danny I wish I can give you a big hug. And you've written this one for many to ponder deep. I love you my dear friend. Keep strong. xoxo, Kina
Duet Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 3:41 AM
Awesome, awesome write Danny. Questions only the Holy Spirit within you can answer. Just listen. All we can do is love God enough to trust Him and our neighbor enough to forgive him. Other than that, we should enjoy our last day however makes us feel the most at peace.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 2:12 AM
Beautifully written Daniel. Questions we probably have all asked ourselves. I would spend my last day with my children, loving on them. : )
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 7:11 PM
A superb write my friend...may your thoughts go where peace is found...may the angel's comfort you Daniel...god bless...love and peace...^WW^
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