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Grieves For the Hardness

Grieves for The Hardness

shaking withered hands 
strain to undo a torx bolt
memories of youth

8/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:44 PM
such a sad one, Eve. I sometimes look at my hands and think how big the veins now look!
Man Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Eve, such a powerful Senryu.. wonderful !
Trifiatis Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 10:58 AM
How true my dearest, Eve. Things we do in youth come back to haunt us!
Blown Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 1:51 AM
hard old hollowed hands
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