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upon damp sand grievances write.... high tide sweeps

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/14/2023 7:09:00 PM

Such a fine Senryu that highlights the finite life of grievances. Like all things in life, this too shall pass. I enjoyed these insightful 3 lines. Best wishes Sara, Sincerely Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2023 2:44:00 AM

Why, thank you, Brian. I appreciate the best wishes. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2023 4:41:00 PM

... gone forever, Sara - Skillfully written :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/14/2023 2:24:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I like the smile. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2023 3:09:00 PM

For the best…taken out to sea it disperses…

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2023 3:30:00 PM

Yes, the high tide will take them out to sea for me and they will be gone! Thanks for dropping by, Kim. Your comments are always just what I need. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/13/2023 11:43:00 AM

I enjoyed your write/picture. It is fun to write in the sand. Wish I was on your beach. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2023 2:20:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the kind review of my work. would enjoy a long beach stay, but alas, sometimes things don't work out like we would like it to. Sara

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/13/2023 2:48:00 AM

It is actually very good advice to write your grievances in the sand to be wiped away by the high tide, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2023 5:09:00 AM

Suzette, Yes, get rid of them in a matter of a few hours. Voice them only in the sand. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the comments. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2023 12:58:00 PM

very cool the message you implied here!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2023 2:08:00 PM

Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/12/2023 9:52:00 AM

It comes and goes I suppose Sara.? Thats With all things temporal..Only God changes Not yet He alters all to His will eventually or Instantly, come to it..'

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2023 2:08:00 PM

With God, all things work to the good of those who love Him. Thanks for your delightful review of my work. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/12/2023 5:12:00 AM

Great observation--moments well captured, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2023 2:06:00 PM

Why, thank you, Vijay. Your comment is uplifting. Sara

Randall Donahoo

Date: 4/11/2023 9:15:00 PM

Clever indeed! Gripe with grace and walk away.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2023 2:06:00 PM

Thank you, Randall. Walk away will always be a good way to handle things. Your visit was a great addition to my page. Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/11/2023 4:37:00 PM

A comforting thought, Mrs sara. There have been times I wished it was that easy. Great to see you today:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2023 2:05:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel. Yes, sometimes it takes a lot of effort on our part to work out grievances. Your visit is delightful. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/11/2023 4:10:00 PM

Yes! Tide is the best cleanser: Sweep away the grievances and replace them with gratitude!! Cheers, gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/13/2023 7:51:00 PM

Gratitude -- always the best attitude. Take care, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2023 2:04:00 PM

Gershon, So much to be thankful for in this life, if only. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara