Sara Kendrick Poet Senryu

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Grievances

upon damp sand

                                          grievances write....

                                                               
                                                               high tide sweeps    

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Brian Sambourne April 14, 2023 at 7:09 PM Such a fine Senryu that highlights the finite life of grievances. Like all things in life, this too shall pass. I enjoyed these insightful 3 lines. Best wishes Sara, Sincerely Brian Sara Kendrick April 15, 2023 at 2:44 AM Why, thank you, Brian. I appreciate the best wishes. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2023 at 4:41 PM ... gone forever, Sara - Skillfully written :) - hugs Sara Kendrick April 14, 2023 at 2:24 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. I like the smile. Sara

Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2023 at 3:09 PM For the best…taken out to sea it disperses… Sara Kendrick April 13, 2023 at 3:30 PM Yes, the high tide will take them out to sea for me and they will be gone! Thanks for dropping by, Kim. Your comments are always just what I need. Sara

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2023 at 11:43 AM I enjoyed your write/picture. It is fun to write in the sand. Wish I was on your beach. Have a blessed day writing away.............. Sara Kendrick April 13, 2023 at 2:20 PM Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the kind review of my work. would enjoy a long beach stay, but alas, sometimes things don't work out like we would like it to. Sara

Suzette Richards April 13, 2023 at 2:48 AM It is actually very good advice to write your grievances in the sand to be wiped away by the high tide, Sara. Sara Kendrick April 13, 2023 at 5:09 AM Suzette, Yes, get rid of them in a matter of a few hours. Voice them only in the sand. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the comments. Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2023 at 12:58 PM very cool the message you implied here! Sara Kendrick April 12, 2023 at 2:08 PM Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Joe Maverick April 12, 2023 at 9:52 AM It comes and goes I suppose Sara.? Thats With all things temporal..Only God changes Not yet He alters all to His will eventually or Instantly, come to it..' Sara Kendrick April 12, 2023 at 2:08 PM With God, all things work to the good of those who love Him. Thanks for your delightful review of my work. Sara

Vijay Pandit April 12, 2023 at 5:12 AM Great observation--moments well captured, Sara. Sara Kendrick April 12, 2023 at 2:06 PM Why, thank you, Vijay. Your comment is uplifting. Sara

Randall Donahoo April 11, 2023 at 9:15 PM Clever indeed! Gripe with grace and walk away. Sara Kendrick April 12, 2023 at 2:06 PM Thank you, Randall. Walk away will always be a good way to handle things. Your visit was a great addition to my page. Sara

Daniel Turner April 11, 2023 at 4:37 PM A comforting thought, Mrs sara. There have been times I wished it was that easy. Great to see you today:) Sara Kendrick April 12, 2023 at 2:05 PM Thank you, Daniel. Yes, sometimes it takes a lot of effort on our part to work out grievances. Your visit is delightful. Sara

Gershon Wolf April 11, 2023 at 4:10 PM Yes! Tide is the best cleanser: Sweep away the grievances and replace them with gratitude!! Cheers, gw Gershon Wolf April 13, 2023 at 7:51 PM Gratitude -- always the best attitude. Take care, Sara! Sara Kendrick April 12, 2023 at 2:04 PM Gershon, So much to be thankful for in this life, if only. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara