Grief

Bright autumn sunlight
Ironing out morning chill
Dad lay still and cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breedt Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:10 AM
Hi Sara. Powerful haiku this. I also lost my mother in May this year. I can identify.
Chansarkar Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Thanks Jannie, it hurts
Tiyane Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Oh man, be strong..
Chansarkar Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thanks Bukiwe.
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