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Grief

Bright autumn sunlight Ironing out morning chill Dad lay still and cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/9/2016 12:10:00 AM
Hi Sara. Powerful haiku this. I also lost my mother in May this year. I can identify.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 12/10/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Jannie, it hurts
Date: 12/7/2016 10:57:00 PM
Oh man, be strong..
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 12/10/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Bukiwe.