Tom Larrow Poet Couplet

Grief

It attacked my life like a swarm of predatory wasps
Anger, regret, pain, confusion, to ruin me at all costs
unprovoked, vicious stings to my soul, many a tear
made me hollow inside, without joy, living in fear

Unable to run or hide for their venom is already within
To snipe at my belief, questions to drive reflection of sin
Should I seek reasons, or find solace needed in a friend
My friends helped win battles, and the war inside did end

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Joe Maverick November 22, 2013 at 2:01 PM How positive the help you recieved Tom; Its part of the key here, and by putting this down you are a proactive force become; God bless you. Joe..) Joe Maverick November 22, 2013 at 2:07 PM Oh and well done on the win..!

Skat A October 4, 2013 at 9:19 PM Nice winning poem.......SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta October 2, 2013 at 5:06 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Tom

Dr.Ram Mehta October 2, 2013 at 5:05 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Tom

Dr.Ram Mehta September 30, 2013 at 5:41 AM Very fine write to make feel others the grief, Tom

Dr.Ram Mehta September 30, 2013 at 5:36 AM Very fine write to make feel others the grief, Tom