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Grief

It attacked my life like a swarm of predatory wasps Anger, regret, pain, confusion, to ruin me at all costs unprovoked, vicious stings to my soul, many a tear made me hollow inside, without joy, living in fear Unable to run or hide for their venom is already within To snipe at my belief, questions to drive reflection of sin Should I seek reasons, or find solace needed in a friend My friends helped win battles, and the war inside did end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/22/2013 2:01:00 PM
How positive the help you recieved Tom; Its part of the key here, and by putting this down you are a proactive force become; God bless you. Joe..)
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Joe Maverick
Date: 11/22/2013 2:07:00 PM
Oh and well done on the win..!
Date: 10/4/2013 9:19:00 PM
Nice winning poem.......SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:06:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Tom
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Tom
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Date: 9/30/2013 5:41:00 AM
Very fine write to make feel others the grief, Tom
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Date: 9/30/2013 5:36:00 AM
Very fine write to make feel others the grief, Tom
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