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Grey Summer Clouds


grey summer clouds roil
lightening flash thunder boom-
raindrops dance below



written:  7-10-11
haiku-hue Poetry contest   9th place out of 10
Sponsor:  Kim Rodrigues

Copyright © Jeanne Mcgee | Year Posted 2019

naturerainsummerhaiku

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July 28, 2019 at 6:55 PM

lovely imagery Jeanne, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

July 29, 2019 at 9:28 AM

We just had one yesterday and everything smelled so good afterwards.

July 15, 2019 at 12:17 PM

congratulations on your awesome win, :)

July 29, 2019 at 9:28 AM

Thanks Eve.

July 15, 2019 at 7:54 AM

Nicely written, Jeanne. I always enjoy a nice summer thunder storm as long as it is not severe. Congrats on your win. John

July 15, 2019 at 10:51 AM

I agree totally...quick thunderstorms are fun but I hate to be cooped up inside too long. Thanks John.

July 14, 2019 at 9:40 PM

A great Summer dance it is! Congratulations, Jeanne! Hugs...Kim

July 14, 2019 at 11:31 PM

Thanks Kim. What a great idea for a contest to get us musing.

Caren Krutsinger

July 12, 2019 at 9:11 AM

Beautifully done; the raindrops dance. Nicely written, Jeanne.

July 12, 2019 at 9:30 AM

:) thanks so much. I'm really ready to see the sun again here in the Northwest...

July 11, 2019 at 5:53 PM

Wow! This is great. Well done :)

July 11, 2019 at 11:52 PM

Thanks Heidi. I wrote it while watching a storm yesterday.

July 11, 2019 at 5:04 PM

Makes me yearn for the monsoon... I love the lightning and thunder, dust storms and chaos. Wonderfully written. Ann

July 11, 2019 at 11:54 PM

Thanks Ann. Me too if it's only a couple of days! Or just lightening flashes far off on the horizon of the sea. Thanks for reading and commenting.

July 11, 2019 at 12:11 PM

Oh! Smashing juxtaposition in your haiku. G.L. in the contest. (Soup mail, please). :) gw

July 14, 2019 at 10:21 PM

And back with congrats on your win in Kim's contest! Nicely done. :) gw

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