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grey summer clouds roil lightening flash thunder boom- raindrops dance below written: 7-10-11 haiku-hue Poetry contest 9th place out of 10 Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 7/28/2019 6:55:00 PM
lovely imagery Jeanne, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/29/2019 9:28:00 AM
We just had one yesterday and everything smelled so good afterwards.
Date: 7/15/2019 12:17:00 PM
congratulations on your awesome win, :)
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/29/2019 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 7/15/2019 7:54:00 AM
Nicely written, Jeanne. I always enjoy a nice summer thunder storm as long as it is not severe. Congrats on your win. John
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/15/2019 10:51:00 AM
I agree totally...quick thunderstorms are fun but I hate to be cooped up inside too long. Thanks John.
Date: 7/14/2019 9:40:00 PM
A great Summer dance it is! Congratulations, Jeanne! Hugs...Kim
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/14/2019 11:31:00 PM
Thanks Kim. What a great idea for a contest to get us musing.
Date: 7/12/2019 9:11:00 AM
Beautifully done; the raindrops dance. Nicely written, Jeanne.
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/12/2019 9:30:00 AM
:) thanks so much. I'm really ready to see the sun again here in the Northwest...
Date: 7/11/2019 5:53:00 PM
Wow! This is great. Well done :)
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/11/2019 11:52:00 PM
Thanks Heidi. I wrote it while watching a storm yesterday.
Date: 7/11/2019 5:04:00 PM
Makes me yearn for the monsoon... I love the lightning and thunder, dust storms and chaos. Wonderfully written. Ann
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 7/11/2019 11:54:00 PM
Thanks Ann. Me too if it's only a couple of days! Or just lightening flashes far off on the horizon of the sea. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 7/11/2019 12:11:00 PM
Oh! Smashing juxtaposition in your haiku. G.L. in the contest. (Soup mail, please). :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2019 10:21:00 PM
And back with congrats on your win in Kim's contest! Nicely done. :) gw