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Grey Skies

the water gently taps my face, as a stranger does an open door I lye on that shower floor thinking dreaming ....crying loving u i feel like theres no one else to turn to no where else to look no where else to look but the sky but all i see are clouds and nothing more all i see are grey skies,..raging eyes what have i become what has this world become we can change it our love can overcome the toughest of obsticles ..but your blinded.. blinded by the grey skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2010 9:48:00 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Alize. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 12:49:00 AM
nice one, enjoyed this read tonight... or dare i say morning lol
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