Grey Skies

the water gently taps my face, as a stranger does an open door
I lye on that shower floor
thinking 
dreaming
....crying
loving u
i feel like theres no one else to turn to
no where else to look
no where else to look but the sky
but all i see are clouds and nothing more
all i see are grey skies,..raging eyes
what have i become
what has this world become
we can change it
our love can overcome the toughest of obsticles
..but your blinded..
blinded by the grey skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 4, 2010 at 9:48 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Alize. Love, Carol
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June 4, 2010 at 12:49 AM
nice one, enjoyed this read tonight... or dare i say morning lol
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