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"Grey Rock" skims a frozen lake the surface never cracks complex post tenure stoic disorder done delivered dead deliberate do not disturb listen silence loudly shrouds walking dead half in shadow world half out (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Andrew John

Date: 9/13/2023 2:56:00 AM

This grey rock gives us so much repetition of consonants. Works well.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/13/2023 2:57:00 AM

Thanks. I had one of my "moments".

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/23/2023 6:43:00 AM

First let me tell you I absolutely love Neil Young as an artist. Your verses are deep and beautiful my dear friend. "When life sups itself, silence is golden. When love is so true, beauty is also beholden." A fav... God bless.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/24/2023 8:28:00 PM

Thank you Lindley. Not one of my better ones; but I was feeling it.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/23/2023 2:09:00 AM

grey rock

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/23/2023 2:09:00 AM

https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/grey-rock#what-is-it

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/23/2023 2:04:00 AM

cptsd

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/23/2023 2:04:00 AM

https://www.healthdirect.gov.au/complex-ptsd

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/23/2023 2:04:00 AM

NPD

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/23/2023 2:05:00 AM

https://www.talkspace.com/mental-health/conditions/articles/narcissistic-abuse/

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/22/2023 2:12:00 PM

"Auguries of Innocence" / William Blake

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/22/2023 3:24:00 PM

https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/43650/auguries-of-innocence

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/22/2023 3:24:00 PM

"Dead Man"/Jim Jarmusch, 1995. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dead_Man

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/22/2023 3:24:00 PM

"Dead Man", 1995, Movie https://ww7.soap2dayhd.co/film/dead-man-6054/

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/22/2023 1:52:00 PM

"I think the worst person you can let down ever, is yourself. The person you must never run away from, but confront full on is yourself. The greatest Strength is always found in the time of breaking, of pure vulnerability, when towers crumble and you are walking through the wreckage, the person you must salvage first is yourself."

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/22/2023 1:53:00 PM

"Ugly pain is savage and beautiful. It's kind of like child birth. That's a war cry, in itself. Ugly pain can tear your whole world apart; without belief of something greater outside of the pain, weakness wins, but strength is belief in something, bigger, better...that always wins...and that is fierce."

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/22/2023 1:23:00 PM

Neil Young – Dead Man Original Soundtrack (1996, Full Album)

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/22/2023 1:23:00 PM

https://youtu.be/mR6mXTWbSEM