Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Grey Outlook

the grey outlook,
bleak sombre forsook,
awful, subtle, painful part,
rose of grey, on a thorny day,
me brains locked up in park.:)
 
thank you,
 
Russells "Grey Roses"  made me do it.

Don

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Tony Lane January 30, 2012 at 2:40 PM Very good Don. It's good to read you again. I've missed your stuff.

Russell Sivey January 30, 2012 at 2:01 PM Awesome comment that one was! I can't compare any of mine quite like yours! Excellent Work!! Don Johnson January 30, 2012 at 4:52 PM i have trouble escaping from the rhyme.... you write well in many format types....Don

Nette Onclaud January 30, 2012 at 5:27 AM i know, russell is infectious today, don.. a wonderful correspondence!..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2012 at 5:08 AM Very well done Don,thank YOU.oxox love Anne-Lise