Grey November

Hush in the daylight,
Tranquil in the night,
Time colours the sky,
Different portraits,
Different seasons,
So is my journey.


October 1, 2026,
Nette Onclaud,
Color My World Poetry Contest.
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October 2, 2026 at 5:42 AM
A lovely, meditative miniature. The gentle parallelism of “daylight” and “night,” followed by the repeated “Different,” gives the poem a quiet, balanced movement that mirrors its contemplation of passing time. Its simple seasonal imagery carries a personal sense of change with grace and calm.
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