Grey Night

Wind spirits aroused.
The chimes threaten them away.
Leaves cover our steps.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Devonshire Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 3:21 PM
Great haiku, Brian! Just last night, I was listening to the windchimes. They can certainly inspire poets, can't they? Love, Carolyn
Anos Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 5:58 AM
Vivid imagery and mental audio stimulation... I even heard the clinking hehehe!
Jordan Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 10:29 PM
Brian - excellent Haiku - great visual - God Bless
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