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Grey Night

Wind spirits aroused. The chimes threaten them away. Leaves cover our steps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/21/2009 3:21:00 PM
Great haiku, Brian! Just last night, I was listening to the windchimes. They can certainly inspire poets, can't they? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2008 5:58:00 AM
Vivid imagery and mental audio stimulation... I even heard the clinking hehehe!
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Date: 9/27/2008 10:29:00 PM
Brian - excellent Haiku - great visual - God Bless
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