Grey Fray

Let go. Move on.
Please no, not gone.

*'Fourtle Poetry Contest
*Sponsored by: Charles Messina
*Entered on: 09/15/25
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Godwin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Oh, the cry. I like.
Hill Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 2:37 AM
Much appreciated, CayCay! :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Nice one! Congrats
Hill Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 2:16 AM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:41 AM
- Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Hill Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 2:15 AM
Appreciated! Thank you, Anne-Lise :) And as always, hugs right back at ya :)
Messina Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Sometimes we just gotta let things go. Nicely done, Talia. Congratulations on your winning placement! Moving on!
Hill Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Very true.. there is something beautiful in releasing that which no longer suits you, even when it's difficult. Thank you so much for the kind words, Charles! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 6:02 AM
- A creative footle, Talia :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Hill Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:20 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! And hugs right back at ya! :)
Sharma Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Two contrasting feelings in such a sweet short package! All the best.
Hill Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 9:55 PM
I'm flattered by the compliment :).. Thank you, Dr.!
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