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Grey clouds for the bride-to-be

It's saturday with friends arrived.
Unwelcomed spitter spatter on her wedding shower.
Nothing will dull their fun !



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Wow so elegantly written. -JWE
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, JW. Most appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:04 AM
I was at a wedding on Saturday, although the clouds were grey it didn't rain thankfully. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Lucky. Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom.
Talbot Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:57 AM
Hmm, a spin dryer comes to mind, did they have one on their list? :-)
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Outdoor weddings are always risky. LOL
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 6:11 PM
A cuteness about this one!
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.
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