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Grey and Used Lying There

Tired and weary, sad and confused, Unwanted, unloved, used and abused, Taken for granted a grey life to live, Done everything for everyone, Nothing left to give. Not needed, not wanted, What else to say, A slave to everything In every way. None to love and loved by none, No word of hope. No, not one crumb. A life so hard, and oh so bare, Grey and used and lying there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2010 2:01:00 PM
This is seriously heart-breaking. You captured pain in every line. Great write.
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Alan. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:15:00 AM
What a very sad write Alan - It has perfect flow - Thanks for sharing such a melocholy write - Sad as it is - I did actually enjoy reading it -:)
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