Grey

The sky is grey, matching my mood
Overcast and slightly subdued

The weekend's sunshine long since gone
It left with the train, my sweetheart was on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Odonkor Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Nicely done...
Smith Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 3:25 PM
I just wanted to let you know I read some of your work today... Your one of the few people I check up on daily, and your words actually mean something to me, so if you have the time.. Would you mind reading my latest poem and maybe giving me some advice if you can?
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 4:59 AM
I hope just a topic expressed differently and not your life..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:24 AM
I really enjoyed this little couplet writing, Nick. Yes, someone leaving will do this to ya!
Tacito Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Been there. Nice ending, though sad. Nice work Nick.
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