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Grey

The sky is grey, matching my mood Overcast and slightly subdued The weekend's sunshine long since gone It left with the train, my sweetheart was on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2011 3:31:00 PM
Nicely done...
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Date: 3/26/2011 3:25:00 PM
I just wanted to let you know I read some of your work today... Your one of the few people I check up on daily, and your words actually mean something to me, so if you have the time.. Would you mind reading my latest poem and maybe giving me some advice if you can?
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Date: 2/19/2011 4:59:00 AM
I hope just a topic expressed differently and not your life..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:24:00 AM
I really enjoyed this little couplet writing, Nick. Yes, someone leaving will do this to ya!
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:39:00 AM
Been there. Nice ending, though sad. Nice work Nick.
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