William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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The Red Planet Mars

One Of Saturn's Moon Titan

Greenhorns - Hiku

*Image of Mars Planet Red by Pixabay & Chemistry on Titan by Space.com.

greenhorns

commie circle
aliens conquest
Martians of earth

ring of blue hope
titan assimilators
half breed earthers

*Movies; Martian Chronicles, and, The Titan

2021 July 01
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND JULY 3
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 July 03

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Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2021 at 9:52 PM I remember seeing these before. Congrats again, and I was curious. Do you care how many hiku we write? Or do you prefer just one or two? William Kelii Kekaula November 18, 2021 at 10:23 PM Films? Ok, got it, and thanks again as well, Andrea, and as far---as hiku's, the door was left open my friend, Aloha!

David Drowley July 6, 2021 at 12:54 PM Congratulations. So compressed, so clear. William Kelii Kekaula July 6, 2021 at 3:45 PM That it is, David, in a nutshell, a Hiku my friend, thank you and Aloha!

Jan Allison July 4, 2021 at 10:03 AM Many congrats on your win William:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula July 4, 2021 at 10:33 AM I appreciate it that, Jan, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2021 at 8:58 AM way to go. Congrats on the win. I do not even know what hiku is. I need to look up the definition!! William Kelii Kekaula July 4, 2021 at 10:32 AM Thanks, Andrea, when I first saw it, the haikus had shorter lines, either wholly or in part, not as the contemporary 5-7-5, albeit, where on PS that I saw that is a mystery my friend, Aloha!