Greener

Im walking towards a better day
today the skies are grey
far from what was yesterday
we used sun rays to bathe
locked away far from our routine today
for hours,days meaningless as we played
sweat drenched smiles as Tonight wains 
excited sighs as morning wakes……….
and when You wake alone…and the skies are grey
Im on the road
you were on the way..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 12, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write today.. hope u will check out the many contests offered on soup to new members..good luck with luv..
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October 12, 2010 at 6:31 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jonathan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 11, 2010 at 2:37 PM
nice one jonathan, enjoyed your write...P.D.
Mehta Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Very creative andostive thoughts you have penned , Greener
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