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Greener

Im walking towards a better day today the skies are grey far from what was yesterday we used sun rays to bathe locked away far from our routine today for hours,days meaningless as we played sweat drenched smiles as Tonight wains excited sighs as morning wakes………. and when You wake alone…and the skies are grey Im on the road you were on the way..

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Date: 10/12/2010 8:33:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write today.. hope u will check out the many contests offered on soup to new members..good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:31:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jonathan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2010 2:37:00 PM
nice one jonathan, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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Date: 10/11/2010 12:10:00 PM
Very creative andostive thoughts you have penned , Greener
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