Green Revolution

Green is my favorite color,
The color of a beautiful nature,
Looking at the lovely green fields ,
My soul really wants your shields .

Trees all around me,
Everywhere I see,
Celebrating a great day,
For us to be happy.

The coolness I feel,
My eye shed a tear,
Hearing the sound of crickets, 
Hiding under the rice fields.

Green grasses proudly showing,
Green frogs merrily croaking,
To the world of wonderful creation,
Thanks God for this green revolution. 


Mother earth is smiling, 
Because of our nice living,
People plant trees and help to clean,
It's now all looks refreshing...so green…


February 23, 2013
For Sandy's Contest "Go Green"
Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Taylor Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Congrats, Maria. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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March 13, 2013 at 6:17 PM
Maria, Congratulations with your wonderful winning poem in Sandy's contest~ always*LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 10:04 AM
Congrad's on your win in the Green contest, may Spring come early for you. Light & Love
Gasun Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 8:23 AM
This is a superb write my dearest friend! I love it and the very beautiful and very refreshing image you've portrait here. An excellent write indeed! A winner for me! Good luck and best wishes always! love always, Leonora
Falotico Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Enjoyed your work and will read more of yours... xxx Michael
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 5:22 AM
I wanted to : - Running barefoot in the green fresh grass on a gorgeous summer day .... - A very good poem Maria! - Good luck in the contest! - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 12:40 AM
this is an excellent entry for the green contest. I love that color and you did it justice!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 4:07 PM
I enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..It would be good if we could all plant a little something every year in our yard to help the planet earth become a better place..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Horne Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 12:38 PM
love this beauty, my friend - congrats on all your wins too : )
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 10:43 AM
Maria I like this a lot, it is fresh and bouncy...David
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