Jeanne Mcgee Poet Haiku

Green Refuge

              

hanging from your branch
I glide high up, then down, free
encircled by leaves

blue sky peek-a-boo
find refuge in green shelter
swing through your sweet peace


written:  8-18-2019

Tree Themed Haiku Poetry Contest
3rd place
used PS syllable counter

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Jeanne Mcgee September 16, 2019 at 2:13 PM Thank you all for your wonderful words and always such inspiration to write more.

Ann Foster September 6, 2019 at 4:43 PM wonderful, and sweet like a treat you wait for all day, that is gobbled up way to fast...I want more... Ann

Beautiful Scars August 25, 2019 at 12:35 PM so cute, congrats sweet Jeanne :)-luloo

Eve Roper August 22, 2019 at 11:43 PM Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley August 22, 2019 at 9:45 PM Your double haiku are twice as nice, Jeanne. Awesome imagery! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2019 at 6:21 PM back again with my congratulations!

Kim Merryman August 22, 2019 at 2:48 PM Congrats on your win with this double haiku! Blessings, Kim

Jan Allison August 22, 2019 at 2:16 PM What wonderful imagery I especially like the second haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 2:09 PM Congrats on your win, Jeanne. Well done.

Edward Ibeh August 22, 2019 at 12:00 PM A double haiku! Both amazing! Congratulations on your win, Jeanne:-) Jeanne Mcgee August 22, 2019 at 12:09 PM thank you Edward...I knew they both needed to be able to stand alone.

John Gondolf August 22, 2019 at 8:27 AM Jeanne, back with congrats on your win. John

Kurt Ravidas August 22, 2019 at 7:40 AM Great refuge. Congrats, Jeanne. Who's refugee?) Jeanne Mcgee August 22, 2019 at 10:49 AM Tania Kitchin sponsor

Anne-Lise Andresen August 22, 2019 at 6:09 AM - Congratulations on your lovely winning poem X 2, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jeanne Mcgee August 22, 2019 at 12:10 PM xoxo Thanks

Caren Krutsinger August 20, 2019 at 3:22 PM The sky is "peek-a-boo" whenever the trees are involved. Nicely penned my friend.

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2019 at 3:41 PM I love the feeling of this one, swinging free through that sweet peace. So nice.

John Gondolf August 19, 2019 at 9:56 AM A beautiful image, Jeanne, best of luck in the contest. John