Green Door

<>green door stands slightly ajar,
come with me, enter here,
light the yellow candle, ah,
come sweetly closer near,

fill me with your amber light,
and draw me closer yet tonight,
till i can feel your heartbeat,
our passion to be Seer,

the rough hewed planks,
splashed wax,  give thanks,
a mental place is here,
behind the door,
meditative sure,
but real as,
it's sincere...   

loves ya babe....Don
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sivey Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 10:28 AM
I love the line, "but real as, it's sincere" very sweet there Don! I really enjoyed reading your incredibly wondrous poem this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
Merryman Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 9:07 AM
I like this, Don! Well done! Love, Kim
Rutherford Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 8:05 AM
I'm sure someone is feeling very special seeing this well crafted poem Don. Anne
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December 1, 2012 at 5:40 AM
Very nicely written Don. If this is for the contest, it's sure to be a win. Warm smiles, Connie
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