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green boughs

green boughs bounce and dance annimatedly jumping - wind whistles a tune

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Date: 3/9/2013 1:18:00 AM
this goes right with your own contest theme!!!
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Date: 3/8/2013 1:38:00 PM
Wonderful haiku and I could see those branches swaying in the wind. Thank you for my placement in the contest. love phyl
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Date: 3/8/2013 6:29:00 AM
Excellent!!!! Hey you should check out a young poet name Margherita Russo
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Date: 3/8/2013 5:16:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:35:00 PM
Hi Francine, such a visual poem; brings to mind the pine boughs in winter as they move in the winter wind. Lovely imagery in your words. Tim came by to nudge me his blog and I saw your comment and felt so humbled you would think my writing worthy of such praise. Thank you, that will be with me always! Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 3/5/2013 7:12:00 PM
thats what there doing right now
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Date: 3/4/2013 1:21:00 PM
Good to read your animated work today..Sara
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:35:00 PM
There is so much joy in this one....lovely!! Makes me happy! Thank you for that!
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Date: 3/3/2013 2:10:00 PM
Francine very good...David
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Date: 2/27/2013 10:25:00 AM
Lovely haiku Francine xx
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Date: 2/25/2013 12:02:00 PM
Francine very good...David
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Date: 2/24/2013 5:17:00 PM
superb haiku-ing, Francine!! I just loved the assonance AND alliteration of those two words: boughs and bounce!!
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Date: 2/24/2013 1:08:00 PM
Great haiku, Francine! I can picture this so clearly. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/24/2013 1:04:00 PM
Dear Francine ..... it is GORGEOUS! - Good luck in the contest, hope you win. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2013 12:55:00 PM
A visual flow in your Haiku. Well done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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