Green Boughs

green boughs bounce and dance

    annimatedly jumping

          - wind whistles a tune
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Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:18 AM
this goes right with your own contest theme!!!
Babcock Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Wonderful haiku and I could see those branches swaying in the wind. Thank you for my placement in the contest. love phyl
Sanders Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Excellent!!!! Hey you should check out a young poet name Margherita Russo
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 5:16 AM
Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
Wesley Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Hi Francine, such a visual poem; brings to mind the pine boughs in winter as they move in the winter wind. Lovely imagery in your words. Tim came by to nudge me his blog and I saw your comment and felt so humbled you would think my writing worthy of such praise. Thank you, that will be with me always! Love, Elizabeth
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March 5, 2013 at 7:12 PM
thats what there doing right now
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 1:21 PM
Good to read your animated work today..Sara
Richards Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 12:35 PM
There is so much joy in this one....lovely!! Makes me happy! Thank you for that!
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Francine very good...David
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February 27, 2013 at 10:25 AM
Lovely haiku Francine xx
Williams Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 12:02 PM
Francine very good...David
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 5:17 PM
superb haiku-ing, Francine!! I just loved the assonance AND alliteration of those two words: boughs and bounce!!
Merryman Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 1:08 PM
Great haiku, Francine! I can picture this so clearly. Love, Kim
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Dear Francine ..... it is GORGEOUS! - Good luck in the contest, hope you win. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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February 24, 2013 at 12:55 PM
A visual flow in your Haiku. Well done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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