Greedy

Running on 
               tongue of dog 
                                  saliva of desire lives


-November 01, 2018 Chattogram
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Wolf Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 9:18 PM
'Saliva of desire' -- excellent turn of phrase, Mahtab! Very special. Well-done monoku. :) Gershon
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November 1, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Impressive dear, MAHTAB!
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November 1, 2018 at 7:03 AM
I am understanding this poem in this way - that we desire to live life as easily, and automatically in the love world of the most loving animal on earth, the dog.
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