Greediness

gripped with greed’s* pleasure entombed in self-owned great mine… there he languishes
*Proverbs 15:27 He that is greedy of gain troubleth his own house; but he that hateth gifts shall live. July 9, 2019 2nd place, "Senryu about Greed..." Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 7/15/2019.
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Callus Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 12:28 PM
This is really good, Beata, especially if interpreted metaphorically. ~ Congratulations on a merited win. Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 6:11 PM
very descriptive of greed. Congrats to you, Beata.
Mitra Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 9:35 PM
So true, .. Congrats Beata
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 7:26 PM
Oh yes...languishes! Congratulations, Beata!
Kitchin Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu!
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