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Greater Than Fame

If I had the courage to tell you how I feel Would you go with me, so I could try to reveal That I love you with all my heart And that I should hope we never part See most men want love when it's just right But I'm not most men, I have seen the light You have changed my soul into love that I can't explain The only way I can save myself is calling out your name You have held my love ,unknowingly, for quite the longest spell And only now do I realize that my heart has already fell The love in which I ponder for, is what you quench for me My days of looking for love have finally been set free So as I tell you that I love you, I hope you do the same Because you and I together would be greater than any fame

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 8:16:00 PM

Nicde write on the feelings of love,RM

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 8:16:00 PM

Nicde write on the feelings of love,RM

Cory Long

Date: 5/14/2011 5:04:00 PM

this is beautiful nicely done.. cory

James Foulk

Date: 5/14/2011 4:30:00 PM

a very beautiful and creative piece of poetry. I lost my internet connection over a week ago, but have it back now. thank you for your comment on Hiding from the wind.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2011 6:20:00 AM

Luv is the best thing to experience in life R.M. .. and it sure makes the world go round .. it is greater than any fame.. it is to be treasured and cherished ..so creative.. thankxx for sharing luv..

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/14/2011 2:35:00 AM

Yes, love is the greatest gift to have-- especially when it works both ways. A warm, uplifting write.