Greater Than Fame

If I had the courage to tell you how I feel
Would you go with me, so I could try to reveal

That I love you with all my heart
And that I should hope we never part

See most men want love when it's just right
But I'm not most men, I have seen the light

You have changed my soul into love that I can't explain
The only way I can save myself is calling out your name

You have held my love ,unknowingly, for quite the longest spell
And only now do I realize that my heart has already fell

The love in which I ponder for, is what you quench for me
My days of looking for love have finally been set free

So as I tell you that I love you, I hope you do the same
Because you and I together would be greater than any fame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/14/2011 8:16:00 PM
Nicde write on the feelings of love,RM
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:16:00 PM
Nicde write on the feelings of love,RM
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:04:00 PM
this is beautiful nicely done.. cory
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Date: 5/14/2011 4:30:00 PM
a very beautiful and creative piece of poetry. I lost my internet connection over a week ago, but have it back now. thank you for your comment on Hiding from the wind.
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Date: 5/14/2011 6:20:00 AM
Luv is the best thing to experience in life R.M. .. and it sure makes the world go round .. it is greater than any fame.. it is to be treasured and cherished ..so creative.. thankxx for sharing luv..
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Date: 5/14/2011 2:35:00 AM
Yes, love is the greatest gift to have-- especially when it works both ways. A warm, uplifting write.
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