David Mohn Poet Triolet

Greater Consciousness

Within the weave of nature’s gown
    A circled pattern smartly strewn
   Seamless seasons, spinning round 
   Within the weave of nature’s gown
Like autumn jewelling summer’s crown
    A butterfly from death’s cocoon
  Within the weave of nature’s gown
    A circled pattern smartly strewn

            ** 16 Aug 2015 **

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Skat A September 4, 2015 at 6:10 PM Congratulations David.... SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 1, 2015 at 1:57 AM Wonderful write and a superb top place win David! Big congrats !

Anu Nayak August 31, 2015 at 1:47 AM hearty congrats on this beautiful write's win!!!...........love, Anu:)

Carrie Richards August 30, 2015 at 11:59 AM Lovely triolet, David !! A huge congratulations on your win !!

Richard Lamoureux August 30, 2015 at 11:18 AM This was a great one to read out loud. Congratulations on your top placement.

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2015 at 3:51 PM wow, Sept. 1st is such an awesome birth date to have!! Happy birthday I will tell you early. I am sure to forget!! Yes, the circle of life is exquisitely presented here. HOw I love the triolet form!

Pam Deremer August 16, 2015 at 9:55 PM I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.