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Within the weave of nature’s gown A circled pattern smartly strewn Seamless seasons, spinning round Within the weave of nature’s gown Like autumn jewelling summer’s crown A butterfly from death’s cocoon Within the weave of nature’s gown A circled pattern smartly strewn ** 16 Aug 2015 **

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/4/2015 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations David.... SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2015 1:57:00 AM
Wonderful write and a superb top place win David! Big congrats !
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Date: 8/31/2015 1:47:00 AM
hearty congrats on this beautiful write's win!!!...........love, Anu:)
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:59:00 AM
Lovely triolet, David !! A huge congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:18:00 AM
This was a great one to read out loud. Congratulations on your top placement.
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:51:00 PM
wow, Sept. 1st is such an awesome birth date to have!! Happy birthday I will tell you early. I am sure to forget!! Yes, the circle of life is exquisitely presented here. HOw I love the triolet form!
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:55:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
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