John Scott Poet Rhyme

Great White

If you can see it, it’s quite a sight
A shark in the soup, a great white
Huge teeth and stone dead black eyes
To approach it, I do not advise
It only appears in December
To feast on a premium member
Life members do not apply
And the others are only small fry
Premium members are you afraid
I bet that you want to upgrade

Shark in the soup contest
Anthony Slaucer

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P.S. Awtry January 6, 2019 at 5:52 PM a very clever write! Congratulations :) John Scott January 7, 2019 at 3:28 AM Thank you for taking time to comment xx

Line Gauthier January 6, 2019 at 7:00 AM Very clever, John. Congrats. John Scott January 7, 2019 at 3:29 AM Thank you x

Tania Kitchin January 6, 2019 at 5:04 AM Nicely done, the shark is clever enough to lurk around even lifetime members! John Scott January 7, 2019 at 3:30 AM Thank you for commenting xx

Jan Allison January 6, 2019 at 4:15 AM interesting take on the theme I've not seen any shark who circles premium members only, no one is immune:-( hugs Jan xx John Scott January 7, 2019 at 3:31 AM Thank you for your many comments xx