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Great White

If you can see it, it’s quite a sight A shark in the soup, a great white Huge teeth and stone dead black eyes To approach it, I do not advise It only appears in December To feast on a premium member Life members do not apply And the others are only small fry Premium members are you afraid I bet that you want to upgrade Shark in the soup contest Anthony Slaucer

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Date: 1/6/2019 5:52:00 PM
a very clever write! Congratulations :)
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John Scott
Date: 1/7/2019 3:28:00 AM
Thank you for taking time to comment xx
Date: 1/6/2019 7:00:00 AM
Very clever, John. Congrats.
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John Scott
Date: 1/7/2019 3:29:00 AM
Thank you x
Date: 1/6/2019 5:04:00 AM
Nicely done, the shark is clever enough to lurk around even lifetime members!
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John Scott
Date: 1/7/2019 3:30:00 AM
Thank you for commenting xx
Date: 1/6/2019 4:15:00 AM
interesting take on the theme I've not seen any shark who circles premium members only, no one is immune:-( hugs Jan xx
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John Scott
Date: 1/7/2019 3:31:00 AM
Thank you for your many comments xx

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