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Great Migration

african grassland deafening roars of hooves the great migration Contest: : THE TROIKA (Haiku with hooves) Spondor : John Lawless Written on: 11th of January, 2017

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Connie Pachecho

Date: 1/15/2017 12:47:00 AM

you followed the sponsors theme to the letter. others that placed didn't. i was shocked to see your entry not place. this is way better than the others.

Jamie Pan
Date: 1/16/2017 2:38:00 AM

Thanks! Oh well, I definitely agree with you, but I can't say the sponsor is wrong. After all, everyone had different views on the same thing.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/11/2017 6:27:00 PM

lovely haiku good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jamie Pan
Date: 1/11/2017 10:39:00 PM

And by the way, I have just received your email and have changed the capital letters, thanks so much for the email!

Jamie Pan
Date: 1/11/2017 10:38:00 PM

And by the way, I have just received your email and have changed the capital letters, thanks so much for the email!

Jamie Pan
Date: 1/11/2017 9:59:00 PM

Thank you!! :)