Jamie Pan Poet Haiku

Great Migration

african grassland
                           deafening roars of hooves
                                the great migration

                Contest: : THE TROIKA (Haiku with hooves)
                Spondor : John Lawless
                Written on: 11th of January, 2017

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Connie Pachecho January 15, 2017 at 12:47 AM you followed the sponsors theme to the letter. others that placed didn't. i was shocked to see your entry not place. this is way better than the others. Jamie Pan January 16, 2017 at 2:38 AM Thanks! Oh well, I definitely agree with you, but I can't say the sponsor is wrong. After all, everyone had different views on the same thing.

Jan Allison January 11, 2017 at 6:27 PM lovely haiku good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jamie Pan January 11, 2017 at 10:39 PM And by the way, I have just received your email and have changed the capital letters, thanks so much for the email! Jamie Pan January 11, 2017 at 10:38 PM And by the way, I have just received your email and have changed the capital letters, thanks so much for the email! Jamie Pan January 11, 2017 at 9:59 PM Thank you!! :)