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Great Love

Love is intense at sixteen Love, unreciprocated, loss Intense loss Depths of longing Heights of soaring Floating, contentment The eyes see, the heart wants Hoping for intense glances Burning the depths of eternity Solar glow giving Love's hot flame Tingle down my spine

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 3:41:00 PM

OOOOOH< So TRUUUUE Delicious reading, Doris!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2010 1:20:00 PM

It was so long ago that I am not sure that I remember what love was like. LOL> Great job in this write. Is this just a suggestion of what we will get in the month of February. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2010 9:21:00 AM

Those feelings experienced at 16 can be intense for sure! You never believe you're going to recover. Great write, Doris! Peace, Audrey

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/16/2010 4:04:00 AM

An awful lot of feeling in this fine piece thanks Daniel

Marty Owens

Date: 1/15/2010 8:49:00 PM

Wow this is a hot poem Doris...This must be love month instead of next month...lol Enjoyed...Marty

Mike Patrick

Date: 1/15/2010 5:38:00 PM

holy crap you have alot of poems on here lol... thanks for taking the time to read mine... and ya im alright always have been ;)... i just joined this site... i kind of like it already lol im sure i will put more on here in the future sometime its nice to get some kind of feedback on them haha... well thx again keep inspiring <3

James Peranteau

Date: 1/15/2010 3:03:00 PM

Wow,...boy meets girl,..only poets ! Beautiful reminder mine poetic friend of the summer vacations camping,....and I'm sure other adventures 16yr olds have encountered ! Ty for this poem,...going to mine fav'z ! james

David Byrne

Date: 1/15/2010 2:59:00 PM

Oh I wish I could have those days back again, the new feelings were a dream!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2010 2:13:00 PM

makes you feel high like on love with this one! Nice! andrea