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Great Love

Love is intense at sixteen
Love, unreciprocated, loss
Intense loss

Depths of longing
Heights of soaring
Floating, contentment

The eyes see, the heart wants
Hoping for intense glances
Burning the depths of eternity

Solar glow giving
Love's hot flame
Tingle down my spine

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Andrea Dietrich

January 16, 2010 at 3:41 PM

OOOOOH< So TRUUUUE Delicious reading, Doris!

Sara Kendrick

January 16, 2010 at 1:20 PM

It was so long ago that I am not sure that I remember what love was like. LOL> Great job in this write. Is this just a suggestion of what we will get in the month of February. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom

Audrey Haick

January 16, 2010 at 9:21 AM

Those feelings experienced at 16 can be intense for sure! You never believe you're going to recover. Great write, Doris! Peace, Audrey

Daniel Cheeseman

January 16, 2010 at 4:04 AM

An awful lot of feeling in this fine piece thanks Daniel

Marty Owens

January 15, 2010 at 8:49 PM

Wow this is a hot poem Doris...This must be love month instead of next month...lol Enjoyed...Marty

Mike Patrick

January 15, 2010 at 5:38 PM

holy crap you have alot of poems on here lol... thanks for taking the time to read mine... and ya im alright always have been ;)... i just joined this site... i kind of like it already lol im sure i will put more on here in the future sometime its nice to get some kind of feedback on them haha... well thx again keep inspiring <3

James Peranteau

January 15, 2010 at 3:03 PM

Wow,...boy meets girl,..only poets ! Beautiful reminder mine poetic friend of the summer vacations camping,....and I'm sure other adventures 16yr olds have encountered ! Ty for this poem,...going to mine fav'z ! james