David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

Great Expectations

sun warms earths surface 
         new shoots refract into light 
         ~  glimmers of springtime 


Spring - Traditional Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury
Syllable counter PS  5/7/5.  25/02/2021

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Caren Krutsinger March 10, 2021 at 6:25 PM These glimmers just brought spring into my dendrite highway, so thank you! David Kavanagh March 11, 2021 at 2:29 AM Thanks Caren, now if winter stops digging its heel in, it can go all the way to our fingertips, cheers David

Susan Lawrence March 9, 2021 at 12:12 PM David... Just lovely !I love "new shoots refract into light " . I can feel the sunlight ! Congratulations on your win! All the best, Susan :) David Kavanagh March 9, 2021 at 12:27 PM Heya Susan, thanks so much for the congrats, I was delighted to get a placement, hopefully my image kicks fully into action soon, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty March 9, 2021 at 11:50 AM Simply can not wait its arrival David Christopher Flaherty March 9, 2021 at 12:25 PM Exactly what you said David. Read the comment below , take it you had another win mate. Racking up the victories now and well desreverd if i may so myself. Congratulations David Kavanagh March 9, 2021 at 11:59 AM Can’t happen soon enough Christopher, we all need a lift

Line Gauthier March 6, 2021 at 12:47 PM Lovely, David. Congrats on your win ~ David Kavanagh March 6, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thank you Line, I’m delighted to have made the cut, cheers David

Beata Agustin March 3, 2021 at 10:36 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. David Kavanagh March 4, 2021 at 1:02 AM Thanks Beata, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Brian Sambourne March 3, 2021 at 7:38 PM Your pen is in fine form. The spring seasonal muse is with you. Sincerest regards, Brian David Kavanagh March 4, 2021 at 1:01 AM Thanks again Sam, struggling a bit last few days, muse wants a holiday, or a pay rise, Might have to go to mediation, cheers David

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 3, 2021 at 7:29 PM Congratulations on your win with this lovely haiku ~ Mala David Kavanagh March 4, 2021 at 12:57 AM Thanks Mala I’m so delighted with your placement it was totally unexpected, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2021 at 6:07 AM - This time in February / March is like "night and day" ... one day it feels like spring ... next like winter .... a lovely moment, David - Best wishes in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :) David Kavanagh February 25, 2021 at 6:18 AM Absolutely Thanks Anne-Lise, can see the hesitation of nature as I walk around not fully wanting to commit itself just yet, cheers David