Grayer Grays, of Fractured Lives

The older I got my youth washed away 
through the frozen waterfalls and cold rocks, 
tripping on moss waiting for the next day.
Nurturing was fictional to the flocks 
of starving young, instead steel chains and locks.

Famished for affection we wanted to
be scooped up in loving arms, kissed goodnight, 
teased and played with, and had fun things to do.
Father worked very hard, came home then right
out at night, glad that we were out of sight.

The fights were horrendous over money; 
we shook like leaves over our father's wrath.
Never any jokes, nothing was funny, 
always had to cope with the aftermath.
We loved him, though we stayed out of his path.

Love is meant to be warm and breathtaking, 
when nonexistent it is heartbreaking.

1/24/2018

Poetry Contest: 'A STUNNER JANUARY 2018' 
Sponsored By:	Line Gauthier
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your fine win.
Krampe Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 5:11 PM
What a sad, bitter memory you told so well in your poem. Congrats on your win, Eve.
Haight Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Indeed, so very sad, Eve. But how well you brought your emotion to us with this well-written poem. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Williams Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Eve, congratulations on sharing this insightful and sad poem. It's a well-deserved win for you in this contest. All my very best to you. :) Bartholomew
Callus Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Very sad, Eve. Some parents don't realize that material things are not going to make up for love affection. Congratulations on your deserved win. Hugs // paul
Neumann Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 3:47 AM
Sad and heartbreaking. Congratulations on your win and thank you for penning your emotions. Kai
Barden Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Eve - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 12:16 AM
Is a great one! Congrats, my friend!
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March 18, 2018 at 12:05 AM
Congrats on your win!
Canerdy Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Very moving and excellently written, Eve! CONGRATS! Janice Soupmail.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:29 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Eve :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:11 AM
A poignant poem with a balance of raw emotion and touching imagery. Congrats on a winning poem, Eve.
Williams Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 5:00 AM
An emotional write Eve, children robbed of a happy childhood is such a sad thing. Good luck on this wonderful sonnet....Maria
Tripp Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:56 PM
Wow. Such a sad write. Emotional.
Murray Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 5:27 PM
So sad when home should be a happy place of comfort Eve. I too trembled to hear Dad's wrath.
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:30 AM
A new form of sonnet, looks like an interesting form, you did very well and created a sad poem...
Gupta Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Beautiful reflection on the theme ... ending with the lovely couplet, Eve ... a sure win ...
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:32 AM
You brought me to tears Eve! Every line so honestly touching and heartbreaking. Such experiences do affect a lifetime. This is a winning poem.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:56 AM
An agonizing Sonnet expressing traumatizing truths in superb poetic way! Good luck dear, Eve!
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:46 AM
- It was different then, Eve - Mother was usually home and dad had to work hard for food and clothes - Only the last seven years after my mother died, I've learned to know my father - A great poem with a theme that many people know and feel - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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