Gray To Green

Three days without gold and
We are poor
Pink pulls itself to life yet
We are pressed
Sup-, im-, de-
Gray to green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 26, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Ryan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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April 15, 2010 at 3:23 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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April 14, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. enjoyed your creative and colorful write.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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April 13, 2010 at 8:58 PM
I enjoyed the poem
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