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Gray To Green

Three days without gold and We are poor Pink pulls itself to life yet We are pressed Sup-, im-, de- Gray to green

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 12:56:00 AM

Ryan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/15/2010 3:23:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2010 5:26:00 AM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. enjoyed your creative and colorful write.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/13/2010 8:58:00 PM

I enjoyed the poem