Yanny Widjanarko Poet Sijo

Gray Sky Falls

Paralyzed sunshine of the day, gray kissed skyscrapers in faint
Blurry dance stuck in the air as the dew pervades some occlusions
Day sketched gloom in beauty behind the droplets of breezy nimbus

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Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2013 at 3:00 PM Yanny, a wonderful sijo... a very deep poem..the ending image goes well with the title...xox~PD Yanny Widjanarko February 6, 2013 at 5:01 PM Thank you for your lovely poem Linda :D - hug, yanny

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2013 at 11:47 PM So elegant your words, sweet Yanny!! Yanny Widjanarko January 22, 2013 at 4:43 PM Hello Andrea :D, glad too see you :D, wishing you a great day :D

Victoria Anderson-Throop January 21, 2013 at 4:04 PM elegant like the line: Blurry dance stuck in the air Yanny Widjanarko January 21, 2013 at 4:13 PM Thank you Victoria, i missed you too :D, thank you for your visit it's really a pleasure to see you around :D - hug, yanny

Michael J. Falotico January 21, 2013 at 12:58 PM Very nice... always nice to return to the Soup and read work that stands tall like this piece.. luv n hugs Michael Yanny Widjanarko January 21, 2013 at 4:11 PM Thank you Michael :D, missing you too in here :D have a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny

Husna Mirza January 18, 2013 at 7:27 AM Nice! :D Yanny Widjanarko January 18, 2013 at 7:36 AM Thank you Husna :)