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Gray Silence

I have gotten the deepest meaning of Your pronounced words, Now then, remove your veil of gray silence, Whisper to me or scream at me! I am longing to hear all your words— Secret or revealed, Not so long ago we jostled the crowd To meet each other like Big billows of the sea dashing over the rocks With profound ruthlessness, Like blue water in a lagoon riddled by the Prolonged chorus of ducks, Like echoes of shrieking albatross on The belt of pines across the sea, Like tempestuous wind of the north, So, remove your veil of gray silence now and Whisper to me or scream at me!

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Date: 4/16/2019 10:50:00 PM
Your metaphors and meanings are wonderfully expressed in this powerful poem, Mustofa. I can relate to the subject matter personally right now, because I have a sister who has gone silent on me ( emotionally distancing). Anyway, this is a fave for me!
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Mustofa Munir
Date: 4/17/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thank you so much. So nice of you appreciating my poem. I feel your feelings. Hope everything will be fine soon.
Date: 4/16/2019 3:44:00 AM
written beautifully-Like blue water in a lagoon riddled by The prolonged chorus of ducks,
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Mustofa Munir
Date: 4/16/2019 2:22:00 PM
Thank you for your inspiring comment.

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