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Gravity

jumping up to touch
dreams that dwell among the stars-
jealous earth responds

-21 May 2014-

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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July 9, 2014 at 8:13 PM

Ooh good one David, grats on your win

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2014 at 11:21 PM

Wonderful win David... PD

July 8, 2014 at 8:42 PM

Ahh!.. Love this one, David.. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

July 8, 2014 at 5:46 PM

David, this one is one of the top ones for me...really lovely. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Yours was one of the most creative of them all. Congrats. I would put it in top three!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 2:16 AM

Great one David,, perfect haiku ,, congrats on huge win!

July 8, 2014 at 12:33 AM

Lovely approach to the theme, david, congrats on the win

July 7, 2014 at 9:15 PM

David, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

June 5, 2014 at 9:34 AM

This is a great take on the 'gravity' theme! gl in contest David. // paul

July 8, 2014 at 10:39 AM

This was one of my favourite entries! Congrats on your win, Dave!

May 24, 2014 at 4:18 AM

Ooh, I like this one. Great imagery and very well-written! You should be pleased!

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2014 at 9:05 PM

good one, I like how you relate jealousy with the earth for when we try to jump for the stars!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 22, 2014 at 4:31 AM

i love the jumping up to touch... :D the imagery is so cute... like a lil child reaching for something.. :D

May 22, 2014 at 12:27 PM

Thank you Olive...I appreciate the kind comments and the picture it paints

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