Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Soup Social
Member Poems
Member Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Poetry Resources
Home » Poems » David Mohn » Gravity

Gravity

jumping up to touch dreams that dwell among the stars- jealous earth responds -21 May 2014-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Nance Avatar
Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2014 8:13:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Ooh good one David, grats on your win
Login to Reply
A Avatar
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 7/8/2014 11:21:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Wonderful win David... PD
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Arlene Smith
Date: 7/8/2014 8:42:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Ahh!.. Love this one, David.. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Login to Reply
Gibson Avatar
Faye Gibson
Date: 7/8/2014 5:46:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
David, this one is one of the top ones for me...really lovely. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/8/2014 3:49:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Yours was one of the most creative of them all. Congrats. I would put it in top three!
Login to Reply
A. Sharma Avatar
Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2014 2:16:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Great one David,, perfect haiku ,, congrats on huge win!
Login to Reply
Mehta Avatar
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 7/8/2014 12:33:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Lovely approach to the theme, david, congrats on the win
Login to Reply
A Avatar
Skat A
Date: 7/7/2014 9:15:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
David, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 6/5/2014 9:34:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
This is a great take on the 'gravity' theme! gl in contest David. // paul
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 10:39:00 AM
block poet
This was one of my favourite entries! Congrats on your win, Dave!
Michaels Avatar
John Michaels
Date: 5/24/2014 4:18:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Ooh, I like this one. Great imagery and very well-written! You should be pleased!
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/23/2014 9:05:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
good one, I like how you relate jealousy with the earth for when we try to jump for the stars!!
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 4:31:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
i love the jumping up to touch... :D the imagery is so cute... like a lil child reaching for something.. :D
Login to Reply
Mohn Avatar
David Mohn
Date: 5/22/2014 12:27:00 PM
block poet
Thank you Olive...I appreciate the kind comments and the picture it paints

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry