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Gravity

Gravity What is it holds me awestruck - in this galaxy Beauty’s truth at play. 5/21/2014 for Picture This #1 contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:37:00 PM

you are welcome PD

John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2014 4:25:00 AM

Great haiku! Congrats on your win!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 8:54:00 PM

Great Haiku, I dig it :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:25:00 PM

Nice win John....PD

John Lawless
Date: 7/9/2014 7:57:00 AM

and again I thank you for reading and commenting.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:52:00 PM

Congrats on a beautiful win, John my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

John Lawless
Date: 7/9/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Arlene

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 5:55:00 PM

Congratulations, John. Nicely stated.

John Lawless
Date: 7/9/2014 7:56:00 AM

thanks Faye.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2014 3:58:00 PM

That is a cute line: Beauty's truth at play!! Congrats on the winners' list, my friend.

John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2014 4:09:00 PM

Hey, Andrea, I found the blog. Thanks for your support .

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/8/2014 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations, John on this beautiful write and a great win!

John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2014 1:18:00 PM

Thanks for checking in and commenting.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 1:01:00 AM

Very fine write John ,, worth a win! Big congrats!

John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2014 1:14:00 PM

Thank you as always for your comments and support.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2014 12:42:00 AM

Nice interpretation of the picture, John. congrats on the win

John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2014 1:14:00 PM

Thank you. gravity has so many subtle nuances of interpretation as evidenced by the amazing results of this contest.

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:17:00 PM

John, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2014 1:12:00 PM

I thank you for your support. I will try to figure out the Blog thing and check it out.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/22/2014 3:53:00 AM

:) i was awed at your piece. :)

John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2014 1:10:00 PM

Olive, Thank you Olive, don't know how I missed this first comment.