Gravity

Gravity

What is it holds me
awestruck - in this galaxy
Beauty’s truth at play.



5/21/2014
for Picture This #1 contest

beautyhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2014 at 5:37 PM

you are welcome PD

John Michaels

July 10, 2014 at 4:25 AM

Great haiku! Congrats on your win!

Casarah Nance

July 9, 2014 at 8:54 PM

Great Haiku, I dig it :)

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2014 at 11:25 PM

Nice win John....PD

John Lawless

July 9, 2014 at 7:57 AM

and again I thank you for reading and commenting.

Arlene Smith

July 8, 2014 at 8:52 PM

Congrats on a beautiful win, John my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

John Lawless

July 9, 2014 at 7:56 AM

Thank you Arlene

Faye Gibson

July 8, 2014 at 5:55 PM

Congratulations, John. Nicely stated.

John Lawless

July 9, 2014 at 7:56 AM

thanks Faye.

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2014 at 3:58 PM

That is a cute line: Beauty's truth at play!! Congrats on the winners' list, my friend.

John Lawless

July 8, 2014 at 4:09 PM

Hey, Andrea, I found the blog. Thanks for your support .

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 11:24 AM

Congratulations, John on this beautiful write and a great win!

John Lawless

July 8, 2014 at 1:18 PM

Thanks for checking in and commenting.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 1:01 AM

Very fine write John ,, worth a win! Big congrats!

John Lawless

July 8, 2014 at 1:14 PM

Thank you as always for your comments and support.

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 8, 2014 at 12:42 AM

Nice interpretation of the picture, John. congrats on the win

John Lawless

July 8, 2014 at 1:14 PM

Thank you. gravity has so many subtle nuances of interpretation as evidenced by the amazing results of this contest.

Skat A

July 7, 2014 at 9:17 PM

John, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

John Lawless

July 8, 2014 at 1:12 PM

I thank you for your support. I will try to figure out the Blog thing and check it out.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 22, 2014 at 3:53 AM

:) i was awed at your piece. :)

John Lawless

July 8, 2014 at 1:10 PM

Olive, Thank you Olive, don't know how I missed this first comment.

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