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Frozen solid Engulfed by quicksand Spinning faster

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Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 1:00:00 PM

Ricahrd, it's a grand world out there. Love what you have here. Thank you for sharing *SKAT LOVE*

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 1/3/2015 2:32:00 AM

Dizzy andspiralling through our minds...

Daver Austin

Date: 8/26/2014 10:36:00 AM

The sensation is of the moment. Makes me think. daver

Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 7:49:00 PM

Love how you did this Tim

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 7:47:00 PM

Ohh I love the images, great haiku Richard grats on your win

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:28:00 PM

congrats on a great win, Richard my friend.. love engulfed by quicksand.. hugs.. Arlene

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations, Richard, on a fine win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2014 3:42:00 PM

You spun into the winners' circle with this one, my friend. BIG congrats to you.

Richard Ferry
Date: 7/27/2014 7:16:00 PM

Faster and faster..Thanks Andrea

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2014 10:03:00 AM

Great haiku, Richard! I can see this three-dimensional. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 2:24:00 AM

Wow Richard an awesome write, congrats on huge win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2014 12:20:00 AM

Awesome poem, very deep, richard and congrats on the win

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/8/2014 12:17:00 AM

Hi Richard, congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:31:00 PM

nice win..PD

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:14:00 PM

Richard, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 10:21:00 PM

finally seeing your reply to my last message to you over here. Don't you remember? I don't see them unless I come looking for a poem of yours to comment on again. haha. So you are older than I am, huh? Dang, there are a lot of us oldies over here at Soup now.

Richard Ferry
Date: 6/21/2014 2:13:00 PM

Only a few years older.>>Living down in tropics last ten years is a fountain of youth...Going back soon,,This time, I think, Nicaragua or Uruguay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2014 6:49:00 PM

Richard, when Sinatra was in full bloom, I was just a little kid listening to Herman's hermits. but later I grew to appreciate his singing!! Were YOU a fan? Let me quickly see if there is any oldie of yours I have not seen. Gotta hurry and make dinner soon so if you don't hear from me more,it means I could find nothing.

Richard Ferry
Date: 6/10/2014 9:49:00 PM

I am not much older than you...I better put up a photo..I am an Italian from the city...Everybody listened to Frank