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Gravitas

Gravitas 

Hey blue 
hello there red
Achoo!

Stay clear 
It’s contagious 
You hear!

Go now!
I can’t resist 
Somehow 


Finding Your Musette 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
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03/03/2021  pictures # 2

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Kim Merryman Date: 4/26/2021 12:44:00 PM David, congrats on your 1st place win with this creative musette! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/26/2021 2:27:00 PM Heya Kim, thank you so much for dropping by, I was imagining the enormity of 2 planets, yet completely helpless to defy gravity, and the inexorable random events that will occur over there lifetime, cheers David

Alexis Y. Date: 4/25/2021 12:26:00 PM Hi David, What a clever and creative write. I like what you came up with. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day;-) Alexis Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/25/2021 12:40:00 PM Heya Alexis, thank you for stopping by with congratulations, I’m delighted my different little musette went down so well, cheers David

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/24/2021 3:49:00 PM What a fun and clever Musette David. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/24/2021 3:55:00 PM Heya Connie and thank you for looking in, I was delighted with the placement, sometimes these little musettes can say an awful lot, cheers David

Joseph May Date: 4/24/2021 8:57:00 AM Very nicely done David, Congrats on your win Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/24/2021 9:04:00 AM Thank you Joseph, I’m delighted with the placement in your fantastic imagery contest, I really enjoyed musing over this one, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty Date: 4/5/2021 1:10:00 PM Gravitas Login to Reply Christopher Flaherty Date: 4/6/2021 10:39:00 AM David below you just used all the word's i would choose myself to describe your poetry. Along with Gravitas David Kavanagh Date: 4/5/2021 2:48:00 PM Gravitas, inescapable unstoppable indomitable Irreversible

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/3/2021 1:07:00 PM Had to read it twice! Then I understood. Love it! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/3/2021 1:58:00 PM Heya Kim, yes it is a bit deliberately vague your right, but it does actually say quite a lot about helplessness, and being at the mercy of our surroundings and being prone to unseen forces, I’m delighted you get my message, cheers David