David Kavanagh Poet Verse

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Gravitas

Gravitas 

Hey blue 
hello there red
Achoo!

Stay clear 
It’s contagious 
You hear!

Go now!
I can’t resist 
Somehow 


Finding Your Musette 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Syllable counter PS 2/4/2 x3 
03/03/2021  pictures # 2

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Kim Merryman April 26, 2021 at 12:44 PM David, congrats on your 1st place win with this creative musette! Blessings, Kim M David Kavanagh April 26, 2021 at 2:27 PM Heya Kim, thank you so much for dropping by, I was imagining the enormity of 2 planets, yet completely helpless to defy gravity, and the inexorable random events that will occur over there lifetime, cheers David

Alexis Y. April 25, 2021 at 12:26 PM Hi David, What a clever and creative write. I like what you came up with. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day;-) Alexis David Kavanagh April 25, 2021 at 12:40 PM Heya Alexis, thank you for stopping by with congratulations, I’m delighted my different little musette went down so well, cheers David

Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2021 at 3:49 PM What a fun and clever Musette David. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! Blessings xxoo David Kavanagh April 24, 2021 at 3:55 PM Heya Connie and thank you for looking in, I was delighted with the placement, sometimes these little musettes can say an awful lot, cheers David

Joseph May April 24, 2021 at 8:57 AM Very nicely done David, Congrats on your win David Kavanagh April 24, 2021 at 9:04 AM Thank you Joseph, I’m delighted with the placement in your fantastic imagery contest, I really enjoyed musing over this one, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty April 5, 2021 at 1:10 PM Gravitas Christopher Flaherty April 6, 2021 at 10:39 AM David below you just used all the word's i would choose myself to describe your poetry. Along with Gravitas David Kavanagh April 5, 2021 at 2:48 PM Gravitas, inescapable unstoppable indomitable Irreversible

Kim Rodrigues April 3, 2021 at 1:07 PM Had to read it twice! Then I understood. Love it! David Kavanagh April 3, 2021 at 1:58 PM Heya Kim, yes it is a bit deliberately vague your right, but it does actually say quite a lot about helplessness, and being at the mercy of our surroundings and being prone to unseen forces, I’m delighted you get my message, cheers David