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Graveyard of Dreams

Swirling vortex of crimson dream in aeon, sultry thoughts redeem. dappled shades revelled in flame, wild storm dances, enticing tame. Flower vase breaks,.. bitter perfume, timorous wail, dark clouds gloom, Wrecked in ruins, pieces charred, balloons in fragments, dreams marred. raindrops stab, scathe skin hard. Garden shards, a grim graveyard March 29th, 2019 Submitted to Lu Loo's Rhyme contest Use 10 lines of 5 words each. Rhyme AA BB CC DDDD

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Date: 4/10/2019 5:30:00 AM
great depth, great poem all around, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 4/7/2019 2:00:00 PM
wow went from passionate to deep gloomy! Great images, Debjani. Congrats on your win.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 4/7/2019 11:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea, whenever it comes from you, I am uplifted in my spirit
Date: 3/30/2019 2:08:00 PM
I am in awe of your articulate poetry, Debjani!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 4/1/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thanks Ralph for your wonderful encouraging words