Gratitude

I looked around and saw if there was a reason to be happy, 
For it looked like my life was getting sloppy and choppy; 
But when I started to count my blessings one by one,
Life had been generous and provided for me by the ton.

From that most heavenly hour - the crack of dawn, 
Where the night gives way to a brand new day,
The leaves and the plants wrapped in a misty dew,
Rekindling in my heart the passion for life all anew. 

The sun strolling out from his home in the sky, 
Sound of the chirping birds as they rise and fly,
The smell of the earth after the rain at night,
That's enough to transport my thoughts to a fantasy flight.

In my horizon I saw that great majestic tree -
Which rose above all around it to proclaim that it was free. 
The flutter of the butterfly from flower to flower,
With those beautiful bright colours bewitching every eye.

Those unknown strangers whom I meet everyday,
Whose smile instills confidence that I will conquer today.
My near ones who love me unconditionally every single day;
Toil of the unknown hands that ensures food on my tray.

The moon shining in the clear sky of the night, 
Stars sending forth their distinctive streak of light.
I thank the Creator for today's wonderful sights,
And deep in my heart I know that things will turn out just alright.

Penned on 9th October '15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/19/2015 5:20:00 AM
Congrats on ur sweet win Suraj!
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:59:00 PM
Suraj, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:26:00 PM
Thank you Linda for having these any theme contests and for the encouragement you provide your fellow poets through them.
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