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Gratitude

Thoracic clouds stream Healthy with motion In wisps of whipped cream Slinging dew potion Lifting flower face Open to receive Veritas of grace Exultant to heave Wilted decays past Insolvent in debt Letting fortune last Longer than regret Salvaged from bounties Across the divide Valued in counties Ever to provide Legacies of truth In churning reason Fetching hidden youth Each passing season.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/26/2010 9:09:00 PM
Great piece John.. too bad the Acrostic 2 contest is over.. this one would have been a terrific entry..luv.. keep checking the contest page..
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:07:00 PM
like it. an very cool acrostic keep it cool "
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Date: 8/26/2010 6:56:00 PM
Nice acrostic on This love will save life, John
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Date: 8/26/2010 6:39:00 PM
John, well done on the thankful nature of the world, enjoyed..LeeAnn
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