Grateful The Moon

Grateful the moon
For the bright sun
Like I am of you
You and no one

I'm blaming you
For this fine day
For you brought joy
With all that you say

I love to talk
To listen too
I love to listen
To learn about you

Pretty brown eyes
I can't look away
And for your bright smile
The same thing I'd say

Grateful the moon
Like I am of you
And for the bright sun
You and no one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Daniels Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 11:53 AM
Such lovely simplicity in this poem, Brady. Good rhymes. I like how you’ve used sun and moon metaphorically to illustrate the partnership. The integration of Love, listen with gratitude displays a dollop of sweetness. Well written. ThkU for sharing, I enjoyed. Sending blessings to you., Ghairo.
Battram Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 1:03 PM
Thank you very much
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