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Grasshopper Wild

your green twitching legs making music in the grass not so silently pinging out at me and sticking to my shoulder reacting too late dive into the grass your enormous hiding place i smile at your stealth

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Date: 9/5/2018 1:52:00 AM
this was really cute. Reminding me of my Iowa grasshopper days!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/5/2018 10:09:00 AM
As we are both from the small state of Iowa, you know I remember too.
Date: 9/4/2018 11:32:00 PM
Visual and tactile, and enjoyable! :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/5/2018 10:09:00 AM
Thank you. It was a quick sweet write.
Date: 9/4/2018 11:31:00 AM
Great haiku to visualize.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/4/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Anisha. I had fun with it.
Date: 9/4/2018 9:54:00 AM
Great one! I can picture this :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/4/2018 10:37:00 AM
I thought it might even turn into a personification poem, later and I could have skinny legs then too.
Date: 9/4/2018 7:24:00 AM
That last line made me smile! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/4/2018 7:29:00 AM
I am so glad. I like that!