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grass snake

Green
Rippling
Appearance
Sinuous and
Sleek

Scales
Nestle
As tongue flicks
Keen to taste the
Earth


                   
19.03.19

Light Up The Page 3 Poetry Contest - sponsored by Joseph May

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/1/2019 10:48:00 PM
Well done, Wendy. Congrats on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:09:00 PM
Thanks,Line. This may have been short and sweet but proved to be quite a challenge!
Date: 3/27/2019 2:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great win, Wendy :) -
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:10:00 PM
Thank you,Sunshine. I'd run a mile if I saw one in the vicinity though!
Date: 3/26/2019 8:51:00 PM
Wendy, great write, congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thanks,Eve. Even this harmless grass snake would freak me out though!
Date: 3/26/2019 5:44:00 PM
oohhh, I'm loving this one. For me a second place at least!! Congrats in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:35:00 PM
It's kind of you to say so, Andrea. This was more tricky than it seemed at first sight.
Date: 3/26/2019 5:37:00 PM
Very nicely penned Wendy..Congrats on your win
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:35:00 PM
I'm grateful for your feedback,Joseph.
Date: 3/25/2019 12:11:00 PM
creative, I've never written like this, may be I'll give it a try
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:40:00 PM
Thank you,Noel. Writing alphabetically and within the syllable count was harder than it would at first appear!
Date: 3/20/2019 2:59:00 AM
Well written Wendy, still tweaking as not the easiest form I've found. Tom
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thank you as always for your feedback,Tom. I thought yours was great!
Date: 3/19/2019 10:22:00 PM
I love snakes, Wendy. I do not bring them into the house, but they do not scare me, nor I them. I am grateful to see a positive poem in their honor.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:42:00 PM
I feel a fraud, now, Caren! I am a wimp when it comes to these creatures but was fine just writing about them at a distance!
Date: 3/19/2019 7:03:00 PM
Nice imagery in your lanterne, Wendy! I wish you all the best. :-)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you for bothering to read and comment,Carol.