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Grass Snake

Green Rippling Appearance Sinuous and Sleek Scales Nestle As tongue flicks Keen to taste the Earth 19.03.19 Light Up The Page 3 Poetry Contest - sponsored by Joseph May

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/1/2019 10:48:00 PM

Well done, Wendy. Congrats on your win.

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:09:00 PM

Thanks,Line. This may have been short and sweet but proved to be quite a challenge!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2019 2:04:00 PM

- Congratulations on a great win, Wendy :) -

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:10:00 PM

Thank you,Sunshine. I'd run a mile if I saw one in the vicinity though!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/26/2019 8:51:00 PM

Wendy, great write, congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:25:00 PM

Thanks,Eve. Even this harmless grass snake would freak me out though!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2019 5:44:00 PM

oohhh, I'm loving this one. For me a second place at least!! Congrats in the contest.

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:35:00 PM

It's kind of you to say so, Andrea. This was more tricky than it seemed at first sight.

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2019 5:37:00 PM

Very nicely penned Wendy..Congrats on your win

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:35:00 PM

I'm grateful for your feedback,Joseph.

Noel Flater

Date: 3/25/2019 12:11:00 PM

creative, I've never written like this, may be I'll give it a try

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:40:00 PM

Thank you,Noel. Writing alphabetically and within the syllable count was harder than it would at first appear!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/20/2019 2:59:00 AM

Well written Wendy, still tweaking as not the easiest form I've found. Tom

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:41:00 PM

Thank you as always for your feedback,Tom. I thought yours was great!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/19/2019 10:22:00 PM

I love snakes, Wendy. I do not bring them into the house, but they do not scare me, nor I them. I am grateful to see a positive poem in their honor.

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/5/2019 3:42:00 PM

I feel a fraud, now, Caren! I am a wimp when it comes to these creatures but was fine just writing about them at a distance!