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Grass Edited

Higher you are, greater is your fall, those who are down to earth don't fall Workers cleared uprooted trees from storm ravaged garden ~ grass smiled at them Syllabus count of 17 checked at poetry soup syllabus counter

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/25/2020 10:43:00 AM

What a relief! At last saved from a stressful, unpleasant, suffocating situation! Enjoyed the image you painted, Rama. // Regards paul

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/26/2020 3:34:00 AM

Thanks. Enjoy your day. Take care, Rama

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/12/2020 6:46:00 PM

I would certainly hope that the grass smiled! after breathing a deep sigh of relief. Good monoku, Rama! :) gw

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/13/2020 4:38:00 AM

It was unharmed that's the beauty of being down to earth! Thanks for reading my poem and positive comments. Have a great day ahead Gershon Regards Rama