Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Grapes Under Green Leaves

grapes under green leaves
                                        with diamond dew drops allure us
                                                squirrels' busy night


                                              grapes under green leaves
                                          with diamond dew drops allure us
                                                 gardeners' sweet smile


                                              grapes under green leaves
                                          with diamond dew drops allure us
                                                 eyes who pass near by



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Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2015 at 11:56 AM BL, i enjoy reading your replies on my comemnt.. have a nice day...PD

Skat A March 20, 2014 at 1:42 PM love the beauty here ~SKAT~ Bl Devnath March 15, 2015 at 1:49 PM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun May 24, 2013 at 12:32 AM This is a very beautiful haiku my dear friend, bl! I love it & I again enjoy reading it today! Congratulations once more on your awesome win! love and hugs, Leonora Bl Devnath March 15, 2015 at 1:49 PM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Joe Maverick May 20, 2013 at 11:15 PM Congratulations B L as a fellow yet unplaced entrant; this was a well thought out write and your placement well earned..' Joe..) Bl Devnath May 21, 2013 at 9:14 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Donna Jones May 19, 2013 at 6:51 PM I'm so glad to see you here in this deserving winning spot...many congratulations.... Bl Devnath May 20, 2013 at 11:00 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Connie Gildersleeve May 19, 2013 at 2:36 PM Congratulations on your win. A great Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie Bl Devnath May 20, 2013 at 10:59 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Ray Dillard May 19, 2013 at 11:02 AM Congratulations, bi, and a bountiful harvest to you! RAY Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 11:57 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun May 19, 2013 at 1:41 AM This is really great! Big congratulations on your super win my dear friend bl! Love/hugs, Leonora Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 1:51 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2013 at 12:40 AM I loved yours the first time. Congrats to you. Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 1:52 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 18, 2013 at 10:24 PM Congrats on your fine win. AO Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 1:52 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2013 at 9:28 PM Way to go, congratulations. Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 1:52 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A May 18, 2013 at 8:28 PM BL, congratulations with your way 2 xool winning poem in Alfred's "Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" contest. always~ Linda Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 1:53 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Debbie Guzzi May 18, 2013 at 5:30 PM interesting verse, Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Bl Devnath May 19, 2013 at 1:53 AM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2013 at 1:41 PM these are nice. the images are so sweet. Bl Devnath March 15, 2015 at 1:47 PM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2013 at 8:05 PM BL, diamond dew~~ my eyes are enjoying the view... and I'm no Gardner... but I'm smiling... LINDA Bl Devnath March 15, 2015 at 1:48 PM A lot of thanks for congratulation and I let you know that I am really happy with you and with our lovely Poetry Soup. I always try to cultivate my thoughts which evolve in my inner sense and to depict them through words. How much they are perfect, I don't know but you the P.S. judge perfectly I believe and covey my heartfelt respect. Thanks always.....for your inspiration and for supporting my life in the field of literature. Loved always, bl