The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Grape Soda

My seatmate on the subway
Started taking out his lunch,
Pushing dreadlocks back and headphones
As his sandwich he did munch.

In his right hand was a soda,
Flavored grape, so said the can.
(By the way, on food and drink in subways
There exists a ban.)

I was sitting on his right as he
Quite deftly popped the top
And although the train was lurching,
Well, he never spilled a drop.

Which was fortunate for me because
My pants and top were white
And some purple soda speckles
Would have spoiled my day and night.

But we shouldn’t judge our neighbors
Or expect them to fulfill
Every purple drink’s desire,
Which is itching for a spill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Loved this one, no sour grapes here!!!!
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 5:15 PM
LOL, love your sense of humour - and so glad you didn't get splattered. I once opened a bottle of fizzy water on a train and sprayed an already grumpy lady - very embarrassing, LOL
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 10:04 PM
oh, the title made me want to read this one and I was NOT disappointed. Great portrait you painted of this guy and his grape soda and your train ride!!
Smith Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 3:16 PM
What a fun little poem Ilene...I drink a can of Pepsi on the train each night on the way to work.
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