Olusegun Arowolo Poet Haiku

Grape Fruits

slightly sour juice squeezed
from succulent small grape fruits--
this wine smells better

slightly sour juice squeezed
from succulent small grape fruits--
vine has more of them

slightly sour juice squeezed
from succulent small grape fruits--
raisins made for me



CONTEST:"Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" sponsored by Alfred Vassallo.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire May 20, 2013 at 8:21 PM Dear O.A. My name is Phillip Rollings "Flipper to my friends and you are a friend. I am writing you because Chef asked me to. He is recoverying quite well.He will be back home next Sat. Good luck in the contest. If you haven't read his last post or the blog he asked me to write; please do so this comment makes sense to you. Respectfully Flipper

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2013 at 12:24 AM what a cute title you put for these!!! I enjoyed the read.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 17, 2013 at 10:05 AM Well done... Best wishes bro. AO

Jack Horne May 5, 2013 at 3:31 PM clever play on words - congrats on your wins: )

Sara Kendrick May 4, 2013 at 6:09 PM Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Sara

Donna Jones May 3, 2013 at 3:32 PM I enjoyed this very much...especially the last line...