Granola Afternoon

Pen then, I beg thee,of meatloaf.
Perchance.....or butterflies wings?
Meaning or depth, has little honoring!!

Be a fool and pen of things of today?
The poet-butterflies, all fly swiftly way.
To write of-gremlins at the supermarket?

Life has no meaning, don’t you get it?
It’s supposed to be all a big laugh for misfits!
No, I don’t get it and I never will.

Just want a bowl of granola and humility
To taste it’s grand sweetness under the Oak tree.
In my big sun hat, taking a summer slumber

.             6/19/2021

       (This is my own style of poetry)
               Poetry by Pangie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kiser Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 9:17 PM
Ah, why not! This was a lighthearted and fun read, well done.
Eagle Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Wonderful use of words and imagery!
Romios Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Really? Thank you. It also carried a message. Tweet Tweet!))) Will I ever be a Poet or one who just plays with words? Thank you for your time, Pangie.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Hellopanagiota, this is very creative. I like it. Hugs xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Hellopanagiota, I am glad you like it. I will read Ice Cream Summer Night. Hugs xx
Romios Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Darlene..,love the way you write my name))))); It was creative I agree, Hugs, PANGIE XX MY NEW POEM, ICE CREAM SUMMER NIGHT IS VERY GOOD
Hinshaw Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 4:35 PM
I like this and any other style poem you compose, Pangie. Keep on writing for our education and delight!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 9:40 AM
A cute story/write. I wish I was under your tree with some granola to eat. Sounds wonderful to me. Have a blessed day/week writing away............
Romios Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Hi Miss Paula! Glad you commented on the poem. A lovely lady like you, would be a perfect friend and mellow under the tree, I say! Pangie xx I am blown out on writing LOL
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 1:29 AM
Those that think life has no meaning are walking around with their eyes shut. Love the image in your last stanza, so peaceful. Enjoy your Sunday. Tom
Romios Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Join me under the tree! And yes, anybody thinking life is a barrel of laughs! Needs a room i in nearest psyche ward. Life is a mix of joy and sorrow. Let people experience it! Thanks... Pangie xx
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