Grandpa

As he cast his line
through brown pipe smoke and fog,
Again, he sits and waits.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Talwar Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 4:11 AM
So beautiful and clear Haiku.o love it The line of smoke can be felt.
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 11:12 AM
- A haiku written beautiful and talented, I see your picture clearly! - Well done Diane ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Munsinger Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 10:05 PM
Thank you for such a nice critique Anne-Lise! Your words mean a lot to me, coming from you. If everyone could see so clearly...Diane
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