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As he cast his line through brown pipe smoke and fog, Again, he sits and waits.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 4/20/2017 4:11:00 AM
So beautiful and clear Haiku.o love it The line of smoke can be felt.
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Date: 11/18/2013 11:12:00 AM
- A haiku written beautiful and talented, I see your picture clearly! - Well done Diane ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Diane Munsinger
Date: 11/19/2013 10:05:00 PM
Thank you for such a nice critique Anne-Lise! Your words mean a lot to me, coming from you. If everyone could see so clearly...Diane